I liked it, and it was funny with out being obvious. I quite liked the VAing as well.
Wow, I haven't seen spam like that for a whole week and here I thought we was making progress. Dude, seriously, put some effort into your work. Now I'm not trying to insult you, but if you want to upload something on NG, put some effort into it. You obviously can run the programs to do this, so try using them in a constructive manner. Give me a plot and story line at least, even if it sucks, I'll be willing to give you a better score. If you don't know how to go about this, ASK AROUND. Try the fourm, leave a message when you submit something asking for help. Go to somebody that has done a couple submissions and ask them for pointers. Do a collab, but please, for the love of all that is good, don't SPAM WITH THIS NO EFFORT CRAP. To make my point, look at South Park, its crappy animation but its one of the most popular TV shows on the air (or was)
Feel free to tag this review as abusive because what you put up here is just as bad. Anybody disagrees PM me and lets debate it.
yeah okay buddy
Awsome, great animation... great work...
I can't think of words to give this justice. Simple awsome. There's going to be another one, right?
Its hard to find describtive words....
Its becoming harder and harder to find good work like this anymore. Imaginitve and original. This piece of work was great, lots of thought and effort went into this and you guys really seem to enjoy your work. Please keep it up.
I'm sorry, but i just couldn't finish it. There is real potential there, work on it, ask for help, I just couldn't finish it. Try putting some color in it, work on your animation and voice overs, and please try to find some kinda identifiable plot. Keep working.
No thanks, i love to read bad reviews.
Alrighty, this is going to be a tad harsh.
Oooookay. I like the song. I mean I really like the song. But... you put little effort into this, its a picture with a metal song. Super. Try to do something with it. If you have enough talent to get flash or what you are using you have enough talent to add some stuff to it. I really hate to see stuff on here where no effort was put into it. Even if it sucks I'll rate it as fairly as I can. Put if you do nothing just to get on here and waste peoples time then you will get nowhere. I've seen people put stuff on here that was complete crap, over and over they tried, but at least they tried. Some of them even have become fairly popular on here. Put some effort on you next project and let me know when it is done.
PS. I really like the song by the way.
This is just a simple, quickly put-together post-Clock Day Flash.
That's it. It's not supposed to be creative or serious at all.
How do say?
If you really tried on this push harder, work on your animation and keep going. Try a little bit of story line and go from there. I did like the irony, but you didn't need to point it out. I like your potential.
Hey not bad for your first animation. You're right your art work is terrible, won't argue with you on that, but thats something you can work on. The music was great and the flash animation was pretty smooth which is always a perk. Work on your story, make it good, even if you art sucks you can still have a good story which more or less can balance that out. Keep working on it, and lets see some more.
Ha ha, that was funny, a rap about computer stuff. THERES MORE YOU SAY? OK, I've got to see this.
What happened? You had it going good, but then halfway through it kinda pooed out. It started out really well and the graphics flowed smoothly which I find to be a big perk, the sound on the other hand kinda died. I like the history aspect and the large scale on which you tried to show, for this I give you kudos. Keep trying.
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